Becoming Animals
by Olga Werby
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GENRE: Science Fiction Adventure
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BLURB:
Humans have always wanted to know what goes on inside the minds of other animals. But what if humans could become animals? Toby’s father leads a team of neuroscientists directly connecting the brains of humans with those of animals. And Toby is a prodigy at throwing her mind into the animal subjects in his lab—she’s the best there is.
But Toby suffers from cystic fibrosis and she’s not likely to live into adulthood. Could a radical plan to embed her consciousness into an animal allow Toby to survive? And what does it mean to live without a human body?
Can Toby and her father solve the problem of fully merging two beings before she takes her last breath? Will the government succeed in stopping their efforts before they are done? It’s a race against death and into the minds of animals.
But Toby suffers from cystic fibrosis and she’s not likely to live into adulthood. Could a radical plan to embed her consciousness into an animal allow Toby to survive? And what does it mean to live without a human body?
Can Toby and her father solve the problem of fully merging two beings before she takes her last breath? Will the government succeed in stopping their efforts before they are done? It’s a race against death and into the minds of animals.
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Excerpt Two:
“You can’t ask me to experiment on my own child.”
Will had been arguing with the major for hours, back in his home office, in the apartment he shared with his wife and daughter. With each exchange, he felt like his grasp on the situation was dissolving. The major could be very convincing.
“Toby was very impressive,” the major said.
Will knew that he tended to fold under repeated questioning from the major, eventually adopting the major’s reasoning as his own. And yet he, too, was stunned by his daughter’s accomplishment and wondered what else she could do with a bit of training. If only she weren’t so young. If only she wasn’t his daughter. Will knew that he was about to agree to everything the major wanted. Just one more push…
“What did she tell you?” Major Watson asked again.
Will replayed his daughter’s interaction with the rat in his mind. What Toby had done was nothing short of amazing. A miracle, really.
“She could even sense physical boundaries with the rat’s whiskers!” he said. “There’s no human equivalent to that, not really. I thought with time we’d be able to physically control the animal, but I had no idea we could ever achieve so much integration with its perceptual system. Toby is just a natural at brain-to-brain-interface command. Who knew?”
Will’s excitement over Toby’s achievement in his lab was coloring his emotions, making him more pliable to the major’s arguments. He knew it, but still he couldn’t control his pride and enthusiasm. Everything he hoped for was happening…just not how he had planned.
“Did your daughter ever try the BBI before?”
“The cap? No, never! She’s watched us do it plenty of times. With Dalla being so sick…I mean—”
“It’s fine, Will. You don’t mind me calling you Will?”
“Of course not. And Major, I know the project is classified, but Toby is just a third grader, you know? It didn’t seem…” Will trailed off. It was hard to justify his daughter’s presence in the top-secret military-sponsored lab just because he couldn’t find a babysitter.
“I don’t mind you taking your daughter to the lab,” Major Watson said. “We’ll just make it official—retroactively. We’ll give your daughter a special research status and all the difficulties will go away.” The major stressed the word “difficulties.” It was clearly a veiled threat.
“But she’s only eight,” Will said.
“Clearance isn’t dependent on the maturity of the researcher.” The major let the ambiguity of whom he was talking about hang in the air.
A sustained coughing fit sounded from an upstairs bedroom and both men glanced up at the ceiling. Will’s wife, Dalla, had cystic fibrosis and her lungs were drowning in gelatinous mucus. She was bedridden most of the time now—too weak to walk, gasping for air. It was only a matter of time before Toby would lose her mother.
Worse still, Toby had inherited her mother’s genetic fault. Toby’s lungs were still strong, but with each bout of cold or flu, the girl developed more lesions and risked making her condition worse.
Will felt like he was losing control. The world just seemed so…overwhelming. The only bright spot in all of this was Toby’s remarkable abilities to control the rat.
“Toby Crowe will join the team of researchers in your lab officially,” the major said. “She will be named in the grant and will help you develop your BBI prototype further. And of course she will be bound by the same confidentiality clause as you and your research team. Since she is a minor, the responsibility for her compliance will naturally fall on you.”
Will stared at the tall, dark-featured, crisply dressed man. He felt dazed by the interaction.
“So I expect to see you and your daughter in the lab tomorrow.” The major stood to leave.
“But Toby has school,” Will protested.
“I’ll make sure her education won’t suffer. I’ll personally assign a full-time early childhood development expert to your team.”
“What?”
“We’ll get someone very qualified. Would a full PhD do?”
“For Toby’s teacher?” It was amazing how easily the major swept aside all of Will’s objections.
“Just imagine your daughter freed from a lowest-common-denominator curriculum. The girl is a born scientist! And if she’s not in an elementary school germ factory, she won’t get so sick all the time.”
That was true. Being sick was bad for Toby’s condition. It was also bad for Dalla. When Toby got sick, Dalla couldn’t even be around her, as exposure to even the most common cold could be disastrous. So whenever there was a sniffles outbreak at school—which was often—they tried to keep Toby home. It was the primary reason Toby had spent so much time at Will’s lab—they didn’t want her getting sick at school and Dalla was too sick to take care of her at home. Toby was a quiet, self-sufficient kid, and quite happy at the lab, but Will recognized that her school absences were interfering with her education.
“I guess that could work,” Will heard himself saying.
Not only was Major Watson getting everything he wanted, but, Will realized, he had somehow made Will want it too. Will was actually excited about the prospect of working with his daughter and developing her surprising BBI talent.
“Wonderful! I’ll personally oversee all the paperwork. And of course, I’ll make sure that Toby’s teacher’s salary won’t come out of your research budget. You don’t have to worry about a thing. Please give my best to your wife.” He shook Will’s hand and strode from the Crowe home.
In his mind, Will reviewed their conversation. He tried to understand what he had just agreed to. How would he explain this to Dalla?
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AUTHOR Bio and Links:
Olga Werby, Ed.D., has a Doctorate from U.C. Berkeley with a focus on designing online learning experiences. She has a Master's degree from U.C. Berkeley in Education of Math, Science, and Technology. She has been creating computer-based projects since 1981 with organizations such as NASA (where she worked on the Pioneer Venus project), Addison-Wesley, and the Princeton Review. Olga has a B.A. degree in Mathematics and Astrophysics from Columbia University. She became an accidental science fiction indie writer about a decade ago, with her first book, "Suddenly Paris," which was based on then fairly novel idea of virtual universes. Her next story, "The FATOFF Conspiracy," was a horror story about fat, government bureaucracy, and body image. She writes about characters that rarely get represented in science fiction stories -- homeless kids, refugees, handicapped, autistic individuals -- the social underdogs of our world. Her stories are based in real science, which is admittedly stretched to the very limit of possible. She has published almost a dozen fiction books to date and has won many awards for her writings. Her short fiction has been featured in several issues of "Alien Dimensions Magazine," "600 second saga," "Graveyard Girls," "Kyanite Press' Fables and Fairy Tales," "The Carmen Online Theater Group's Chronicles of Terror," with many more stories freely available on her blog, Interfaces.com.
Links:
Selected Book Links on Amazon:
“Lizard Girl & Ghost: The Chronicles of DaDA Immortals”: https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B07FBR7Q1T/
Guestpost by Olga Werby
Dear Teresa!
Thank you very much for this opportunity to connect with the T’s Stuff Blog readers. Hope they find “Becoming Animals” a good read.
I wrote “Becoming Animals” with my husband and partner, Christopher Werby. You can point your readers to the first few chapters of this book here: https://interfaces.com/blog/becoming-animals/
This story won several indi book awards: 2018 Bronze Medal in the Young Adult Science Fiction from Readers’ Favorite and The Independent Author Network Book of the Year Finalist. “Becoming Animals” is fully-illustrated—why do only kids get to have pictures in their books?
The text of the post is below in addition to some background on “Becoming Animals.” If there is anything I can do to make this interview work better for you, please let me know.
Thank you again for allowing me to share my story with T’s Stuff readers!
All the best,
Olga
Here are a few of my sites:
Author’s Website: https://interfaces.com/blog/
Amazon: amazon.com/author/olgawerby
Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/OlgaWerby/
Twitter: https://twitter.com/OlgaWerby
Company/Publisher: https://Pipsqueak.com
YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCDE3BNceupMYgvoaoAps2mg
LinkedIn: https://www.linkedin.com/in/olgawerby/
Pinterest: https://www.pinterest.com/OlgaWerby/
Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/olgawerby/
And I now have a site that allows students and parents to download free educational materials for elementary and secondary school kids to download and do offline: supermarketscience.com. It is still under development, but keep an eye out if you have kids!
A bit about me:
I write in the genres of sci-fi and magical realism. My background is in astrophysics and psychology. Granted, it’s not a very likely combination for a career…a regular career. But it is perfect for a writer!
I wrote “Becoming Animals” with my husband and partner, Christopher Werby. Our book deals with differences between animal and human cognition and emotional states. How are bird thoughts different from our own? How does it feel to be prey? How would a life of a whale be different from a human girl? And what does it feel like when you are dying? We use this setup to discuss not only the various physiological and cognitive differences between various animals and humans, but to also consider the ethics of using animals in research. I hope this book leaves people thinking about it for many years to come.
About “Becoming Animals”:
Humans have always wanted to know what goes on inside the minds of other animals. But what if humans could become animals? Toby’s father leads a team of neuroscientists who are developing equipment to directly connect the brains of humans with those of animals. Toby is a prodigy at throwing her mind into the animal subjects in her dad’s lab—she’s the best there is.
But Toby suffers from cystic fibrosis and she’s not likely to live to adulthood. Could a radical plan to embed her consciousness into an animal allow Toby to survive? And what does it mean to live without a human body?
Can Toby and her father solve the problem of fully merging two beings before she takes her last breath? Will the government succeed in stopping their efforts before they are done? It’s a race against death and into the minds of animals.
But Toby suffers from cystic fibrosis and she’s not likely to live to adulthood. Could a radical plan to embed her consciousness into an animal allow Toby to survive? And what does it mean to live without a human body?
Can Toby and her father solve the problem of fully merging two beings before she takes her last breath? Will the government succeed in stopping their efforts before they are done? It’s a race against death and into the minds of animals.
Reviews:
"[A] must-read for every science fiction and animal lover." -- a 5 star review from Readers' Favorite
"[A]s a concept for a novel I found the idea of melding with an animal's mind, in Becoming Animals, to be utterly fascinating and was excited to see how this would develop for young Toby. I became very invested in the characters created by Olga and Christopher Werby and consequently enjoyed this children's/young adult book even more than I thought I would. The amount of honest research that had clearly gone on before penning this novel lent real authenticity to the tale. I had heard much of what was discussed in broad details in various places, but had perhaps not realized the possible implications - this was especially true of the idea of neuroplasticity and our brain's ability to reset and remake neural connections, at will or as required. The book was an incredibly easy read and although the science might be above the understanding of some of the authors' intended audience, it in no way detracted from the understanding of the story. This story is unique, in my opinion, a rare quality in today's book market. I commend the two authors for their ingenuity and creativity and can highly recommend this read. A great job!" -- a 5 star review from Readers' Favorite
"[T]he characters, both human and animal, are unforgettable, and the plot is high-tech fantasy at its finest. Becoming Animals is most highly recommended." -- a 5 star review from Readers' Favorite
"[A] very interesting, enjoyable, and thought-provoking read; a brilliant addition to the libraries of science fiction and fantasy fans, as well as anyone who simply enjoys a good story." -- a 5 star review from Readers' Favorite
"[T]his is a great novel for young and older sci-fi fans." -- a 5 star review from Readers' Favorite
"[A]s a concept for a novel I found the idea of melding with an animal's mind, in Becoming Animals, to be utterly fascinating and was excited to see how this would develop for young Toby. I became very invested in the characters created by Olga and Christopher Werby and consequently enjoyed this children's/young adult book even more than I thought I would. The amount of honest research that had clearly gone on before penning this novel lent real authenticity to the tale. I had heard much of what was discussed in broad details in various places, but had perhaps not realized the possible implications - this was especially true of the idea of neuroplasticity and our brain's ability to reset and remake neural connections, at will or as required. The book was an incredibly easy read and although the science might be above the understanding of some of the authors' intended audience, it in no way detracted from the understanding of the story. This story is unique, in my opinion, a rare quality in today's book market. I commend the two authors for their ingenuity and creativity and can highly recommend this read. A great job!" -- a 5 star review from Readers' Favorite
"[T]he characters, both human and animal, are unforgettable, and the plot is high-tech fantasy at its finest. Becoming Animals is most highly recommended." -- a 5 star review from Readers' Favorite
"[A] very interesting, enjoyable, and thought-provoking read; a brilliant addition to the libraries of science fiction and fantasy fans, as well as anyone who simply enjoys a good story." -- a 5 star review from Readers' Favorite
"[T]his is a great novel for young and older sci-fi fans." -- a 5 star review from Readers' Favorite
"[T]his a very interesting, enjoyable, and thought-provoking read; a brilliant addition to the libraries of science fiction and fantasy fans, as well as anyone who simply enjoys a good story." -- a 5 star review from Readers' Favorite
Topic: Why this story?
“Becoming Animals” tells a story of a dying girl whose dad is a scientist leading animal cognition research lab funded by the military. Like many animal labs, Dr. Crowe’s lab worked with rats. Rats are easy to grow, they are smart, and they become adults in just a few short weeks. Dr. Crowe was trying to develop a system where by inserting some wires directly into an animal brain, his team could experience what the rat sees and feels and then give instructions, brain-to-brain, to make the rat perform certain tasks (e.g. ran a maze, solve problems, find an object, etc.). Ideally, if his lab succeeded, Dr. Crowe’s rats would be become living drones capable of going places too dangerous or too sensitive for humans. Brats, as they were called, would make the best rescue team members, scurrying between ruble in earthquake and war zones and sniffing out survivors. They would also make the perfect spies, able to listen and see and steal sensitive information.
Dr. Crowe’s five-year-old daughter played in his lab all the time and even used his equipment. She was the best at brain-to-brain animal connection. But what happens when humans perceive the world through the senses of an animal? While humans and rats both have eyes, and noses, and ears, the way those organs work to provide the human brain with information about its environment is very different from those of other animals. Rats scurry around; they worry about being eaten by predators. Humans no longer worry about being predated as much, at least not on American college campuses. Rats’ noses are really close to the ground; they can sniff out smells that humans don’t even know exist. Rats can “see” the world in “Technicolor fragrance.” But when a human connects to a rat’s odor processing information, can she even make sense of it?
And if a rat were scared, would its human rider feel the same? Can a human become lost in the rat’s mind? Or can we learn to understand and control the information coming form an animal’s senses and emotions? Can we truly control the mind of another being? Or does the process of total brain-to-brain immersion merges and changes both animals, the human and the rat? We get to watch Toby grow up while riding different animals in her dad’s lab—rats, pigs, ravens, and finally a whale. Is Toby even fully human by the end of the story?
It was very fun to write the scenes in this book where Toby rides the various animals in the lab. Aside from ethical dilemmas, getting the details of what it’s like to be rat or a bird or a marine mammal was amazing. A lot of research went into this book. We’ve tried to make the science in this book as accurate as possible. That’s not to say that Brats – brain riding apparatus that turns animals into living drones -- is an existing military program already, just that it’s possible and is getting more probable every day.
One of the easiest ways to learn is through stories. Humans are wired to enjoy and remember them.
Science fiction tells stories about the future or alternative history or some other “what if” scenarios that involve real science pushed to the limit. While entertainment is a perfectly valid goal in itself, sometimes a good story can do more than entertain. I hope this story has made a bit of neurology and animal cognition slightly more approachable for our readers.
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GIVEAWAY INFORMATION:
Olga Werby will be awarding a $25 Amazon or Barnes and Noble GC to a randomly drawn winner via rafflecopter during the tour.
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ReplyDeleteGood morning and thank you for the book description and giveaway.
ReplyDeleteSounds like a good read.
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ReplyDeleteThank you very much for sharing my story with your audience.
ReplyDeleteI've really enjoyed the tour, thanks for sharing all of the great posts along the way!
ReplyDeleteThis book sounds absolutely amazing!!
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